Make Mine a Lion M/M Alpha/Omega Matchmaker MPREG Missed Matched Made Book 1 edition by Harper B Cole Literature Fiction eBooks
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Ryan has given up on finding his true mate. As a latent, a shifter who has never shifted and an omega who's never had a heat, he knows he's broken goods. But he hasn't given up on finding love, so he applies to Ms. Maggie's matchmaking services. But when the match she plans for him isn't quite what he expects, he thinks he might have to give up on that hope as well. But while Ms. Maggie's plan might have gone awry, she may still have set him on the path to find everything he's hoped for.
Make Mine a Lion M/M Alpha/Omega Matchmaker MPREG Missed Matched Made Book 1 edition by Harper B Cole Literature Fiction eBooks
Short and ok story that could have been really good if more time was spent on it. Maybe it was released too soon. I had to often re-read too many sentences to make sense of them. What was up with the pronoun mistakes? I didn't get a feel of the characters, not even what they looked like (one of the lions had green eyes). If I was the author, I would re-do this. Maybe re-do before the second book is done, because who wants to read the second when the first needed so much work. Why put out this mediocre work when with a little more time spent on it, it could be a whole lot better? Good bones, just needs some meat on it.Product details
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Make Mine a Lion M/M Alpha/Omega Matchmaker MPREG Missed Matched Made Book 1 edition by Harper B Cole Literature Fiction eBooks Reviews
I can't honestly recommend this book on its own, it isn't anything special and it was obviously adapted from a M/F romance(at one point he pulls a cellphone from his purse, this purse is never mentioned before or after this) but it could be the start of something decent so I rated it as such.
Loved the characters and the fact that both men didn't have to have perfect bodies. I wish we knew more about the impending baby(ies) besides the tiny glimpse. Short story to the point , with just enough detail to make it interesting.
While there are a few pronoun blunders, i.e. The main character referring to himself as she and her, the story is lovely and at times downright giggle worthy... This would be a lovely series with the humor and magic of shifter matchmakers.. But a really good read on its own..
Ryan can't shift and if he can't shift then his ability to have babies is questionable thus he figures it would be best to find a human husband and just adopt. He decides that a matchmaking site will help (with some cajoling from best friend Camille) but things do not go as he thought they would. As he soon discovers maybe that is not the worst outcome.
Some pronoun mistakes that people may find glaring so beware.
Hopefully the next book in the series is great (I want more Ms. Maggie and Melanie) and has no mistakes.
As the first in this series, it was okay. But IMO it should have been better than okay because it was 1st. Not exactly sure that the next book, whether a standalone or not, is going to be better. if your going to tag the book with MPREG, it would be better to actually have dedicated at least a decent amount time to the subject. It was a mere blip at the very end.
There are enough wrong gender pronouns and a couple of inappropriate nouns to denote this was originally MF and then crudely converted to MM. sometimes even with the crude adaptations the story line works - this one does not. The dynamics between characters is off and the story just feels wrong.
Ryan (wolf shifter) is and older omega, heavy set, and giving up on finding a mate. Instead he leaning towards marrying a human. The problem? He can't shift into his wolf.
This is a short story but full of love, laughter, and the hope of finding what fate has in store for you. Camille makes an excellent best friend and I did wonder about the pride dynamics and where Ryan's mate fit in the hierarchy. I also wanted some closure on returning to the pack and showing his parents, friends, and extended family his mate, his kids, and what his life has brought. They should take pride in who he is.. The ending was a bit rushed but overall a nice short sweet read. - Dan's Wife
Short and ok story that could have been really good if more time was spent on it. Maybe it was released too soon. I had to often re-read too many sentences to make sense of them. What was up with the pronoun mistakes? I didn't get a feel of the characters, not even what they looked like (one of the lions had green eyes). If I was the author, I would re-do this. Maybe re-do before the second book is done, because who wants to read the second when the first needed so much work. Why put out this mediocre work when with a little more time spent on it, it could be a whole lot better? Good bones, just needs some meat on it.
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